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01-05-2009, 11:44 AM
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1. Kang 5-3 vs 2. Tettris 8-2 vs 3. E Tha Real 5-1(Tett wins)
 RULES Verses are due Friday night @ 11:59pm est. Verses should be between 10-30 lines[ no max for champ match] 1st verse sets the line limit if one isnt agreed upon, no editting in that first verse after the second verse is posted and no editting of the second after votes have began. NO exceptions. No biting No feeding No swaying No recycling [unless from a verse that was no showed against & if there is no proof provided once discovered, votes will be deducted] AGAIN 2 consecutive no shows= automatic boot from the league, so sign out if you feel you can't make it because all the no shows wont be tolerated VOTING You must vote on 4 battles each week & post your links to gain credit for your battle votes should be explained in some sort of reasoning, lack of explaination will not be tolerated. Each vote missing will result in a 2 vote deduction from your battle. [no exceptions unless cleared by a mod] Failure to vote 2 weeks straight will result in a 1 week suspension from the league.
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01-05-2009, 03:33 PM
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yea, THAT Tettris
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01-09-2009, 08:55 PM
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Well im Meeeeeee, Thats meeeeee, 2peat Im Meeeeeee 2peattttttt
2 hoes beat,wit such ease cuz neither been known to Throw Heat N Tettris only known for producing OLD lines,switch his name to Crows Feet! And these nerds think you hard??? Im still seein u Gushy fuck ya hometown Even if ur a Va-G That still gonna mean you a PUSSY And my battles unfold like films,an ill director..my shit is real collector So if this other dude is Really Reel, then ima digital projector My value takes off, skyrocketing when I get the chance to Face yall Cuz ima take out 2-3 in my Prime like Chicago Minor league Baseball U lame queer, fuck building blocks and ya attempts at Fame here Cuz in all honesty I never gave a fuck about Tettris...I grew up wit GameGear This other hoe ass rookie is tushy, dammit the Man is Awkward Hit'em with an uppercut so hard He'll be Knocked UP & Out for a year like Candace Parker You cock queen, Tett aint spice things up them lines do NOT Zing Career is basically a Wash Up,like it come out alongside the Hot-Wings Fuckin racist,I remember them black jokes u claimin u bring Honest This Pussy try and diss niggas n love'm, bragginwrites Spring Thomas Fuckin faggot, as we speak theres prolly a dude inside you prick Ima take a Razor and Slice,'Ris,Down like a proper suicide Attempt And if Tett doesnt wow, E Real even shocks lesser... I keystyled this part To show I could Mir'ly beat him with a tap out he's Brock Lesnar I doubt'em, really dont give a fuck where his style from... I got this win Hook, Line, and Sinker .........................../\But thats just describing Ethareal droppin an album We all know I easily won, Im the King of you pawns Hit me up for trainin, every dog has his day & im Cesar Milan Ive seen both yall styles before, so this win Aint a Test,its Easy So fuckin Run of the 'Mill,thought I was battlin Bangaladesh & Weezy Tettris is suttin to laugh at, uglyness ya picture cause Gasp acts Lookin Like Ryan Dunn from Jackass if he lived out of a Trash bag I been with my lady for 8 years, shes a Queen so learn suttin Your Girl? She a Gobbler stuffed with meat & Cock like a fuckin Turduken!!! Gotteeeeeeeeem |
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01-10-2009, 04:39 AM
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yea, THAT Tettris
Join Date: Oct 2008
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Seriously dude...
These hoes’ in denial...guilty of wackness if we were holding a trial And their verses r Proof...n every other rapper with holes n their style Known to defile faggots…u homos don’t have the fire when flowin And aren’t Crown material…even though your silence is golden… Kang’s style’s easy to mimmick…a gimmick textcee with weak flow Watch, Ur so outta ur league, (insert sport’s punch here), call him Pete Rose But who knew I’d be handed the title this week, truth dude? Last time Kang put up a fight, his dad was boxin for gin on youtube We’re both from FS where Tet’s best and always defeated you Not only don’t ur skills translate, beating me seems Greek to you N E tha Real? To keep it real, ur a laughin stock…understand that Only kid that can get clowned on RM for bein in a Champ match LOL @ 5-1…u don’t beat dudes, they jus kno the ho their facin See one cat dropped…the other 5 no shows lacked motivation… I’ve grown impatient…someone please leave him some rhymes Cuz Kang got here with E’s…ghostwriter, so he’ll be needing the lines I’ll make you flee for the border when I’m speakin to slaughter If yall are models for consistency, then I’m your eating disorder… 30 bars Kang? I’m noticing you aint focusing…fuck it… Ur shit went from wow to rock bottom…in just the opening couplet And E…your shits like your dating life…n the chicks never mind You’re consistently outdone…showered up, and in bed by nine… N Kang? I’m rocking your shit…you ain’t competent bitch… In fact, your face’s so Ugg, I swear u got stompped by a chick You shouldn’t reproduce, me n ur women got something in common Carrying two bitches in week eleven only to prematurely drop’em… Thanks for the title bitches…
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01-10-2009, 02:21 PM
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E no shows
Match is now between Kang and Tettris
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01-10-2009, 04:45 PM
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That's me!
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2 hoes beat,wit such ease cuz neither been known to Throw Heat
N Tettris only known for producing OLD lines,switch his name to Crows Feet! ehh, the concept cud've been flipped better And these nerds think you hard??? Im still seein u Gushy fuck ya hometown Even if ur a Va-G That still gonna mean you a PUSSY pretty creative i thought And my battles unfold like films,an ill director..my shit is real collector So if this other dude is Really Reel, then ima digital projector didn't like this My value takes off, skyrocketing when I get the chance to Face yall Cuz ima take out 2-3 in my Prime like Chicago Minor league Baseball ok U lame queer, fuck building blocks and ya attempts at Fame here Cuz in all honesty I never gave a fuck about Tettris...I grew up wit GameGear lol, made me laugh This other hoe ass rookie is tushy, dammit the Man is Awkward Hit'em with an uppercut so hard He'll be Knocked UP & Out for a year like Candace Parker nah, didn't like this You cock queen, Tett aint spice things up them lines do NOT Zing Career is basically a Wash Up,like it come out alongside the Hot-Wings ehh, not great Fuckin racist,I remember them black jokes u claimin u bring Honest This Pussy try and diss niggas n love'm, bragginwrites Spring Thomas didn't like how this was worded personally Fuckin faggot, as we speak theres prolly a dude inside you prick Ima take a Razor and Slice,'Ris,Down like a proper suicide Attempt too forced And if Tett doesnt wow, E Real even shocks lesser... I keystyled this part To show I could Mir'ly beat him with a tap out he's Brock Lesnar ehh, ok i guess I doubt'em, really dont give a fuck where his style from... I got this win Hook, Line, and Sinker .........................../\But thats just describing Ethareal droppin an album lol, funny We all know I easily won, Im the King of you pawns Hit me up for trainin, every dog has his day & im Cesar Milan weak Ive seen both yall styles before, so this win Aint a Test,its Easy So fuckin Run of the 'Mill,thought I was battlin Bangaladesh & Weezy ha, lol Tettris is suttin to laugh at, uglyness ya picture cause Gasp acts Lookin Like Ryan Dunn from Jackass if he lived out of a Trash bag nah, didn't use the concept that well I been with my lady for 8 years, shes a Queen so learn suttin Your Girl? She a Gobbler stuffed with meat & Cock like a fuckin Turduken!!! weak closer overall this was hit and miss. in there were some funny punches that had me rolling. i liked the gamegear one, prolly my favourite and the hook, line and sinker was pretty funny. some stuff was forced though. and i see you got your own style and some shit reads weird to me. verse was inconsistent in places, a lot of ups and downs and i think that may cost you. VS These hoes’ in denial...guilty of wackness if we were holding a trial And their verses r Proof...n every other rapper with holes n their style ok opener Known to defile faggots…u homos don’t have the fire when flowin And aren’t Crown material…even though your silence is golden… simple, coulda been better Kang’s style’s easy to mimmick…a gimmick textcee with weak flow Watch, Ur so outta ur league, (insert sport’s punch here), call him Pete Rose rofl, nice personal But who knew I’d be handed the title this week, truth dude? Last time Kang put up a fight, his dad was boxin for gin on youtube roflz We’re both from FS where Tet’s best and always defeated you Not only don’t ur skills translate, beating me seems Greek to you ok, nuthin great N E tha Real? To keep it real, ur a laughin stock…understand that Only kid that can get clowned on RM for bein in a Champ match rofl, true shit LOL @ 5-1…u don’t beat dudes, they jus kno the ho their facin See one cat dropped…the other 5 no shows lacked motivation… ehh, weak I’ve grown impatient…someone please leave him some rhymes Cuz Kang got here with E’s…ghostwriter, so he’ll be needing the lines coulda been better I’ll make you flee for the border when I’m speakin to slaughter If yall are models for consistency, then I’m your eating disorder… lol, creative and witty 30 bars Kang? I’m noticing you aint focusing…fuck it… Ur shit went from wow to rock bottom…in just the opening couplet ehh, ok And E…your shits like your dating life…n the chicks never mind You’re consistently outdone…showered up, and in bed by nine… nah, didn't like this N Kang? I’m rocking your shit…you ain’t competent bitch… In fact, your face’s so Ugg, I swear u got stompped by a chick lol, made me laugh You shouldn’t reproduce, me n ur women got something in common Carrying two bitches in week eleven only to prematurely drop’em… ok closer yeah, pretty cool verse. i've seen better from you. some of the punches were cool, i thought when you got personal it worked with the direct wording you used rather than trying to be overly creative. some of the shit came off weak in places though and i mean, for me personally i'm not a fan of switching from opponent to opponent with each bar.. towards the end it was like "and kang... and you e real.. yeah, plus kang" you know what i mean. i just feel a bit of focus on one, then on the other reads better. overall, some creative punches, some not so great punches. but more than enough to win. VOTE: TETTRIS
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01-11-2009, 02:44 AM
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And these nerds think you hard??? Im still seein u Gushy
fuck ya hometown Even if ur a Va-G That still gonna mean you a PUSSY U lame queer, fuck building blocks and ya attempts at Fame here Cuz in all honesty I never gave a fuck about Tettris...I grew up wit GameGear Fuckin racist,I remember them black jokes u claimin u bring Honest This Pussy try and diss niggas n love'm, bragginwrites Spring Thomas I doubt'em, really dont give a fuck where his style from... I got this win Hook, Line, and Sinker .........................../\But thats just describing Ethareal droppin an album We all know I easily won, Im the King of you pawns Hit me up for trainin, every dog has his day & im Cesar Milan Ive seen both yall styles before, so this win Aint a Test,its Easy So fuckin Run of the 'Mill,thought I was battlin Bangaladesh & Weezy Tettris is suttin to laugh at, uglyness ya picture cause Gasp acts Lookin Like Ryan Dunn from Jackass if he lived out of a Trash bag v. These hoes’ in denial...guilty of wackness if we were holding a trial And their verses r Proof...n every other rapper with holes n their style Known to defile faggots…u homos don’t have the fire when flowin And aren’t Crown material…even though your silence is golden… Kang’s style’s easy to mimmick…a gimmick textcee with weak flow Watch, Ur so outta ur league, (insert sport’s punch here), call him Pete Rose But who knew I’d be handed the title this week, truth dude? Last time Kang put up a fight, his dad was boxin for gin on youtube We’re both from FS where Tet’s best and always defeated you Not only don’t ur skills translate, beating me seems Greek to you N E tha Real? To keep it real, ur a laughin stock…understand that Only kid that can get clowned on RM for bein in a Champ match LOL @ 5-1…u don’t beat dudes, they jus kno the ho their facin See one cat dropped…the other 5 no shows lacked motivation… I’ll make you flee for the border when I’m speakin to slaughter If yall are models for consistency, then I’m your eating disorder… 30 bars Kang? I’m noticing you aint focusing…fuck it… Ur shit went from wow to rock bottom…in just the opening couplet And E…your shits like your dating life…n the chicks never mind You’re consistently outdone…showered up, and in bed by nine… N Kang? I’m rocking your shit…you ain’t competent bitch… In fact, your face’s so Ugg, I swear u got stompped by a chick You shouldn’t reproduce, me n ur women got something in common Carrying two bitches in week eleven only to prematurely drop’em… wow.. murder. kang was inconsistent as fuck. he had some nice lines throughout but A LOT of wack shit. tett was consistently clowning and effectively at that.. from jump his style was tighter and his punches were crisp. kang got outclassed here. i know i went crazy with the quotes but most of the stuff above was at least pretty good imo with some lines doper than others. tettris wins |
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01-11-2009, 08:40 PM
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i seen where you were goin with ya verse k but the execution killed it for you. wording woulda added to your verse so much tett you were just simply alot more polished. smoother read vote t
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01-11-2009, 09:02 PM
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And these nerds think you hard??? Im still seein u Gushy
fuck ya hometown Even if ur a Va-G That still gonna mean you a PUSSY This other hoe ass rookie is tushy, dammit the Man is Awkward Hit'em with an uppercut so hard He'll be Knocked UP & Out for a year like Candace Parker We all know I easily won, Im the King of you pawns Hit me up for trainin, every dog has his day & im Cesar Milan Ive seen both yall styles before, so this win Aint a Test,its Easy So fuckin Run of the 'Mill,thought I was battlin Bangaladesh & Weezy vs Known to defile faggots…u homos don’t have the fire when flowin And aren’t Crown material…even though your silence is golden… But who knew I’d be handed the title this week, truth dude? Last time Kang put up a fight, his dad was boxin for gin on youtube N E tha Real? To keep it real, ur a laughin stock…understand that Only kid that can get clowned on RM for bein in a Champ match LOL @ 5-1…u don’t beat dudes, they jus kno the ho their facin See one cat dropped…the other 5 no shows lacked motivation… I’ve grown impatient…someone please leave him some rhymes Cuz Kang got here with E’s…ghostwriter, so he’ll be needing the lines I’ll make you flee for the border when I’m speakin to slaughter If yall are models for consistency, then I’m your eating disorder… 30 bars Kang? I’m noticing you aint focusing…fuck it… Ur shit went from wow to rock bottom…in just the opening couplet And E…your shits like your dating life…n the chicks never mind You’re consistently outdone…showered up, and in bed by nine… N Kang? I’m rocking your shit…you ain’t competent bitch… In fact, your face’s so Ugg, I swear u got stompped by a chick You shouldn’t reproduce, me n ur women got something in common Carrying two bitches in week eleven only to prematurely drop’em… i quoted alot from tett lol but yeah, this was a decent read, Kang i thought you weren't bad with your ideas but your wording was off on several to me. Tett was really consistent with solid lines, he had a couple misses, but he definitely came ready for this my favorite line was 30 bars Kang? I’m noticing you aint focusing…fuck it… Ur shit went from wow to rock bottom…in just the opening couplet just came off hard, the rest was all pretty solid too. i got tettris taking this just a better written verse. vote tettris |
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01-11-2009, 09:21 PM
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to much shit to quote here...this was a pretty good match...Kang came alot better than i expected...i like i'd say about 40% of his verse..alot of the lines could have been worded better to have a strong impact..Tett came with some nice stuff here i liked around 75% of his verse..the lines i didn't like weren't horrible..they just didn't have a big impact
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01-12-2009, 02:26 AM
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Alot of bars in this one tet just had more heat on my phone so it's harder for me to break it down but everyone else did a good job of that
Alot of fresh shit in here more of it belonged to tettris tho so he gets my vote
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01-12-2009, 05:06 AM
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Text Head ex.1997
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Tett wins 6-0
Tett is the new champ
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